Alittlepiggy33
The thing with Abby is getting more complicated than necessary, it would be better if it ends on a simple manner. Also, it seems Roy and his stupid friends are all set on ruining their lives as even though Ed will beat them all up. What he is doing is clearly a case of intent to assault and perhaps breaking and entering. And if he follows the cliched pattern once the fools find themselves being beaten up by Ed, they will try to take a hostage
Any form of short media leads to brainrot and every social media will have influencers no matter what rules you impose. Best you can do is punish thottery in your platform or make a separate app to keep them contained. *cough OF* But rewarded promiscuity causes immorality and simps. TFTC Here is what Abby looks like in my head.
At this point, idk how the author will fix the whole situation with the girls.Honestly, I dont want him to end up with hailey or alex... And really just be a family you know? I also want abby to go and pursue her dreams. I'm not a die hard fan, but taylor is the only one i see at the moment that's a bit acceptable, but they already crossed the line even when it's still not legal.. Ugh... I wanted there to be like a time skip to when they're all adults before things like this happen, because... Bruh.. They're just kids, idc if he's mentally or his soul is old, but the girls are literraly just girls.But I guess, it's the writers choice, it's their story. It's not bad, I actually binge read it, because stories bout this tv show is rare, and it's quite decently made. Ps: author, pleae take no offense to what I just said here, it's all just my preference, and by no means am I bashing your choices in the direction of the story. I enjoyed it. I hope you keep at it , but mind your health, both physically and mentally(so you can continue writing heheheh😁)
Honestly thought I hope the author doesn't go much in this route of young teenagers ruining their lives with a stupid action, all this basic "young master" situation, sure is not hard to imagine in a real situation but first Ed isn't a nobody anymore with "luck" and other supernatural abilities that could help him avoid this kinda of bs and cliche situations, second for the karma, sure he can donate a bunch of money to charity but being a millionaire can also accumulate some bad karma and by the rules of the author too much of bring bad luck.