Alittlepiggy33
Dear esteemed literary colleague, I must express my sincerest concerns regarding the current pace of your literary endeavors. Alas, if the production of a mere two chapters per day fails to transpire forthwith, it regrettably compels me to contemplate the initiation of legal proceedings, citing a grievous charge of 'egregious literary deficiency.' Such a course of action, while undeniably regrettable, is necessitated by the perilous affliction of literary ennui that has befallen my weary soul.
Well, since Luke didn’t break anything and even stopped before hitting the helmet, I guess this is punishment enough. Also, I read a lot of comments in the last chapter about how you should not write about the Modern Family characters. Ignore them. This is a Modern Family story, the entertainment things on the side are excellent, and you shouldn’t forget about them, but don’t write just about that. I like that his life is interrupted by family slice of life moments like that. If you left these characters behind, this story would just be about Edward writing and singing songs repeatedly and quickly become boring. Your story so far is perfect, don’t listen to people that suggest such major and, forgive me for saying it like this, stupid changes. Anyway, happy as always, and waiting for the next chapter.
Disclaimer: the following sentences would involve my ranting about this chapter and last few chapters. I think it was better when we only see teenage romance (without lewd) and more focused on slice of life, I think Abby would be better if she leaved the plot after the breakup, lately she acts like a classic musical movie popular blond highschool girl, which is trying to get the male main character to herself by b*tchy way, which I think it is a little bit out of character of her. before I would think her as a sweet childhood friend which is girlfriend of mc but after the break-up, she started to act like a person who is l attention-seeker, but she is only want attention of Ed, which with the timing it started, after his first concert, she just seems like a gold digger to me (even if I know she isn't, it is hard to think otherwise for me). thank you for patiently reading my rant.