Comments of chapter undefined of Rapturous Rhapsody
Rapturous Rhapsody
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i catches up after 2 months not opening this on scrib hub .. see you when i see you again waiting for more chapter .. it is very nice your writing reflects the tension that is happen .wether it is MC hurried and frantic mind and the wives calm , calculating manner on that conversation . too much character is hard to keep up as writer XD. . but, it does make the world feels bigger . it is writing limitation, i hope you can keep effectively choose which character gets screentime for better story.
Micael in his own way wouldn't be affected mentally if he didn't want to with the element of freedom in effect, I'm completely in favor of the white phoenix, they in a way are life and that's why I'm rooting for that, seriously the white phoenix, a dragon of white fire, this is incredible. and that's what they say, faith in crazy women, yandere hehe
