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Comments of chapter undefined of Mythical Slayer: Mythical Girls Contract

Anup_RyuSenju
Anup_RyuSenjuLv4Anup_RyuSenju

sigh, author you're literally pooop in writing lew dd, you should improve it. And most important man up the mc, not some disgusting dense creatures. You should really improve his character of mc, he is so wussy in it. Other than it this novel is very good.

MythicalOssan
MythicalOssanAuthorMythicalOssan

I tried to improve, and his character improved after a certain incident in the future, don't worry.

Slc4free
Slc4freeLv15Slc4free

Why doesnt he tell her he loves her ?

FallenAngeI
FallenAngeILv13FallenAngeI

Kinda rushed, no foreplay or anything like that, just straight to doing it after 1 paragraph of something like foreplay. Nothing exciting or really detailed like how i expected, and too simple as a whole as well. A litlle disappointed. Its good idea to read other novels' lemons to get better idea about it

DrakePhoenix
DrakePhoenixLv15DrakePhoenix

P_Young_4470
P_Young_4470Lv13P_Young_4470

yep it was definitely like a taste test but a failed one but I expected it to suck those honestly because its the only one before they pay wall and they almost always suck

Nickjr321
Nickjr321Lv14Nickjr321

Thanks for the chap