DreamTales
The author's ability to write things is really good. But it struck me as absurd that a soul as pure as Linda would send an assassin after two children. If your plan was to create a conflict between Linley and Ace, you should have done so by staying true to the main story. I'm sorry to say goodbye to this novel.
For real, the one person who was suposed to be sacrificed because of her real pure soul, the one that was supposed to be pratically a saint was reaponsible for this? If it was just linley father that had the ideia and did it alone i could understand, but her knowing and not stoping it is already too much for me, you really didn't give a f% to canon.
And you just did what I didnt want to... you will make Linley go against Ace why??? With so many enemies available why try to go against the MC of this world when he isnt even evil... meanwhile his mother was A Saint who was so kind which was why she was kidnapped, cause of her soul purity... this is stupid, you better have a great wxplanation cause you cant just change somone’s character when you didt even say this was an AU, so it means its cAnon...