Comments of chapter undefined of The Slime Sovereign

so it's not slime mc?.. sad..

Hello I'm Avron and well you're a new author well so am i would love it if we got to know each other you seem to be growing and i want us to become friends and grow together I have a novel called rise of a star and I want to see If you'll read it and give me some feedback and good start to your first chapter

I just hope you Make him strong by himself as well yes many would say it’s boring But like bro lets be real Even if his slimes were to be the strongest beasts there is If he is just a normy then he could die from the clash or get assassinated etc So im hoping you would give him a way to get stronger other than his Authority over slimes Like for example He can use some skills of his slimes Or Every time his slimes level up/evolVe(u said slimes cant but who knows) He can get a bit strongeR

Wow nice start! I can feel the potential in your work [img=recommend]

This was a very good start to the story. The world information was concise and properly explained. The mc is ambitious but not arrogant. Thanks for the Chapter Author.

I hope you can read my book and give a review btw this is by far the best picture I've seen for a novel I've been gushing over it its just amazing

Thanks for the chap

I think it’s best to give advantages and disadvantages between Authority vs Control. Maybe with control, you are basically taking away cognitive functions of the monster so you always have to give orders for every single thing. They have basically no autonomy unlike with Authority.

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very sexy start

he's gonna be amazing I just know it, slimes are adorable so I think he got lucky

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It's not weak if you know how to use it.

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