Comments of chapter undefined of All-in-One System: All I Need is Erotic Coins

Why does he not go and grind more coins you are handicapping the MC to make your story

1. Do they have beds in night clubs? 2. The ability to "enter someone's mind" is telepathy, not telekinesis lol

I'm going to give it a few more chapters, but this is seeming kinda bland to me. Like ik it's the 1st chapter, but I don't really feel any connection to the character at all. Doesn't really feel like I'm reading a novel but instead a list. legit just 1. No powers ,drinks sorrow away 2. System and no friends 3. Powers Omg Now I can go to school 4. Dad, I have powers now

I kind of remembered why I dropped it last time xd

trash lol, MC with low iq

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I'm guessing he's never going to tell his dad how he got his power. Seems kind of selfish to hog the secret to potentially unlocking a power, especially if it's a "bloodline" trait. Also a mother was never mentioned so I'm going to assume that it wasn't subtle misogyny to ignore her chance at the serum and just that she's not around. Either she won the genetic lottery and did what they would have after getting so much stronger than their partner, leave, or she's dead somehow.

New discord link pls?

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Si alguien obtiene un sistema yo creo que lo primero que debe hacer es averiguar cómo conseguir más monedas y de lo que es capaz o no el sistema y ahí recién decidir si usar las monedas dependiendo a la dificultad de usarlos

Thxs for the chap m

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