Comments of chapter undefined of Blood And Iron GoT)
Blood And Iron GoT)
Chill_ean_GUY
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I think it would be better with single reincarnation instead of chain of them. Instead of starting from begining start from an major event. Tell the mc background with many small flashbacks to the past. use flashbacks also guide readers to understand how MC came to conclusions in whatever situation he is in. occasionaly. I think this was how this was writen before and for me it worked lot better than this newly written start.
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Chill_ean_GUY
I loved the story, but I would like more information like how big the army was that was transported and what they brought with them and more info about the places and people around them I know that can be hard so if you cannot do that it is fine i just tried to express where i feel you can improve Apon.
