Chill_ean_GUY
I enjoy the story please keep up the good work and please give me more chapters thank you as far as advice I do have a few suggestions for the money issue . what he needs to make is a simple but easy thing for him to do would be to make a large restaurant / Hotel/ bar across his territory he would make simple ones but in Capital Cities such as Kings Landing he would make a fancy one for Noble Lords and another one four the commoners district the food they would serve would be his own recipes also along with the food that he would be shipping there so low cost alcohol obviously he's making would be superior thus people would would come to establishment to enjoy it and as far as making bedrooms are concerned obviously it would be a good idea to have places where he can or some of his men and he can rest also another idea would be for him to make salt flats salt is extremely expensive in olden times everyone needs it to survive thus everyone has the purchase it and thus dries up the cost since he's obviously close to an ocean since he has a fleet of ships he can obviously make some salt Plains and make a lot of money from that it's quick and easy also in case you're forgetting remember that the reach Main customer is the North what he can do is sell his products or should I say trade his products of food for iron and wood lowering his cost significantly is it a few suggestions I can think of right now I hope they're helpful in any case whether you're taking or not it doesn't matter your story is great please continue thank you for your time and