Takamiya_Shin
loves the chap, specially the Yandere Ichika, not because i love yanderes (that i do) but because it makes sense, logically speaking after ichika died being eaten alive and diying of bleeding she should have being completly broken, after all she was just a small kid, even veteran adults would have PTSD much less her, she was broken and traumatized which is the first and most important requirement for becoming a yandere; mental problems. MC became a Pilar for her to hold on and stay ''Sane'' just like any yandere she relys obsessively and compulsively to this love she developed for her brother, the fact she feel super safe after mc revive her and show his broken power doesnt help either. The thing is i like this because its logical, Its impossible for ichika to came without consequences after that experience, became an obssesed yandere its the most logical outcome
mc is already very Op, after all, the last embryo made izayoi capable of defeating gods of the 4th or 5th layer as soon as he arrived in Akoba, this without any training after all he had no opponents on earth and everything was boring for him , after Akoba he gets even stronger even defeating Azi dahaka who killed gods of the 3rd layer like cutting grass (remembering that the gods there are much stronger than in DXD and beings of the 4th layer can destroy planets and beings of the 3th layer can destroy galaxys) so as long as the author does not nerf the mc i think it will be ok, i hope this is a fun fanfic about an mc OP and his sisters that he tries everything to make happy, not a harem fanfic where he goes around picking up girls from dxd, because i don't I put up with them after I saw what they did in the official DXD novel
I'm just telling you author, The last embryo is just the title of Izayoi and the unofficial name of izayoi's (Unknown) power. Izayoi's peak power in Mondaiji can enter Hightier OP characters in Marvel and mid in DC. yeah basically it's better to really study original fiction if you want to bring that aspect to your fanfic, because it really sucks when fanfic doesn't use the original material properly. and even though DxD isn't that strong but what's clear is that people in the 10 world powers are on Planet level(in the top 5 excluding Ophis and Great Red) so they shouldn't be without a fight.