RaccoonLeague
Hanabi? Introducing even more OCs cheapens this story. And the way she was introducedâŠ.Itâs such obvious harem shenanigans. But did you really have to borrow a future canon characterâs name? Lazy. And I hope the MC stops talking out loud about his progress. He lives in a ninja village with tons of spying jutsus, superhearing, bugs that can transit speech, etc. They certainly donât need to overhear him talking about the âoriginal Minato.â The first thing theyâd think is the MC is an impostor. Internal monologuing is a thing.