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Comments of chapter undefined of [DC] Keep your head down!

HONOURED_ONE
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Telekinesis Haki Decay (mha)

GingerClanger
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Power: Miquella & Malenia (Brother & Sister Powers)- Scarlet Aeonia (Bloom a Flower of Scarlet Rot) Each Activation Spreads the Rots Domain, Holder may Blossom into a Godlike Being of Scarlet Rot.. Side-Effect: Very Easy to Detect Source, Each Bloom Requires a Large Ritual of Blood Infected with the Rot.. - Scarlet Rot (Deal Damage % over Time).. Side-Effect: No Control, Friends? Foes? Building your in? All shall Rot and Decay before the Scarlet Rot.. - Compel Affection (Sentient Beings hold Goodwill, Empathy and Sympathy for the Holder of this Power). Side-Effect: Young Forever (Aged 9-12), Slow Ever-Healing (Even missing Organs, Slowly but Surely you would fully Heal, Maybe add Painfully).. - Rot Immunity (No good if you Rot yourself into Constantly having to slowly Heal with each time you use the Ability.. but maybe that could be a cool Side-Effect; Every use makes his/her Body Decay into something Zombie-like(Doesn't affect Movement, only Appearance) only to Fully heal afew Weeks later, or Suffer the Stares of Fear and Outrage from the Public)

SthUnlimted:From Elden Ring
WhiteDeath113
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This chapter was the best chapter I have read about fanfic in dc, they usaly are very lazy or low quality but dame I love this chapter, I like how author added details on how she manage even if some were lies they were god dane good lies. Hope this fanfic last a long time it’ hard to find fanfics this nice in the DC category

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Yeah, it was the first thought I had

Isaac_Van
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How about telekinisis? I think it could have a lot of potential to evolve in the future without it being too overpowered.