Comments of chapter undefined of Mushoku Tensei: The Blazing Lioness of War

It is a great idea to write on but the MCs personality needs to be more fleshed out from the first 5 chapters I read - as of now, she is coming across as a whiny brat always complaining about her parents even after getting reborn. Doesn't add up that she sent a copy of herself to make sure they are happy and also essence of War being so peaceful is sketchy. Just suggestions from my side - up to you if you want to take them up or not

It's a nice new take on Mashoku Tensei. In my opinion, I think you should continue it and see where it goes. Looking forward to see whatever you write.

I like the idea of the story and I would like see were and how it is going to end.