Narendra
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It is a great idea to write on but the MCs personality needs to be more fleshed out from the first 5 chapters I read - as of now, she is coming across as a whiny brat always complaining about her parents even after getting reborn. Doesn't add up that she sent a copy of herself to make sure they are happy and also essence of War being so peaceful is sketchy. Just suggestions from my side - up to you if you want to take them up or not
Could not agree more - there is not enough love for this masterpiece of an anime/ lightnovel in the fanfic community so you have my full support, author. Just one question - is it a harem?
Completely agree with this. Start your Bleach project and maybe that will help you close this, though I am enjoying these chapters as well [img=recommend]
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May, please
I know you are the author and have the right to present your views throught writing but please buddy, no Kamala Khan - if you are adamant about keeping her please change her into an OC [img=recommend]
Medusa in a fully submissive role to MC and Esdeath as a switch (fully submissive and quite masochistic towards MC but Sadistic Dominant personality towards others) [img=recommend]
Freyja
No, just need a brief summary of each battle