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It’s me again with another analysis. Your mc is a mentally unstable, I mean pretending to be a villain sounds like something I’d do. Anyways I like it, but could he be a little heroic from time to time. Pretending to be a villian all the time just makes you a jerk. And you could have fun doing good to, I mean there is nothing like saving someone’s life, and like uncle Ben said “with great power comes great responsibility” . Last thing I want to say is so many people make his words seem like manipulation, but really it’s just parenting.
Stressed_Ultra:I agree but chill with that uncle Ben quote lol. That mentality will indeed get him killed in Dragon Ball no matter the argument. He is also a saiyan. Plus they can't even hate him for being a "jerk". Now if he took Gohan and injured piccolo more then maybe that's villain activities but he simply acted as a scrub. He most probably won't let raditz take over each ofc so he is in the clear. Also it's quite literally his first time interacting with sentient beings except for the frieza soldier scrub. He hasn't had a chance to be the goody twoshoes yet. Not that it will get him overwhelming far acting like that but hey. Also this isn't attacking you btw simply like to let my opinions be known same as you. Have a good one.
He already made a bad first impression, he could have easily saved goku, I would appreciate it, he befriends bulma and guides her to build a gravity machine, and the "MC" can start training, goku would join the training and increase power quickly, vegeta and napa arrive and give them a beating, and he can convince them to join him and defeat freezer, and they train until they have the power of millions, they can train in the time room with the gravity machine included, and with the spheres increase their life expectancy, and then they defeat freezeer among the four, as they live in a calm environment, they develop s cells and naturally with a little anger, they awaken the super saiyan, and with that they face the father of freezer between the 4 and they defeat him. So later they would continue training, the mc could go to the planet Yadarat to learn techniques. he would try to learn divine ki and ultra instinct, and surprise whis, a deadly achievement of ultra instinct without help!!
Loved the chapter. Honestly it was funny seeing Piccolo that upset even if he hasn't had the chance to aactually have Gohan grow on him as the training pseudo adoption-abduction arc hasn't happened yet lol. He has the art of playing a 3rd rate villain down to a T already so good for him. Can't wait for the next chapter. Also I am glad that instead of becoming arrogant he was humbled by blowing up that planet in a way that should keep him grounded. But yes please keep up the good work.