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Comments of chapter undefined of One Piece: The Unreal Adventure

JJafan
JJafanLv3JJafan

Author, please, I know you want to make things look cooler, but you have to stop using ellipsis' in almost every sentence! Try to branch out more with your writing and grammar, or things can get stale after too much repetition!

Hasan_Shopnil
Hasan_ShopnilLv3Hasan_Shopnil

You could have given another warning to Morgan about not to reveal your crew's location to others.

beatus_consilium
beatus_consiliumLv15beatus_consilium

But... The meat... He's going to have to share the 🍖 meat.

BlkM5k
BlkM5kLv14BlkM5k

this is the last straw.....this whole Morgan business is dumb and pointless as he's doing what you should already want him to do, and he's too strong for never going to the grand line. just ridiculous....dropped

Jin_Kazaragi
Jin_KazaragiLv4Jin_Kazaragi

Merci pour le chapitre !

Sage0fInfinitePath
Sage0fInfinitePathLv4Sage0fInfinitePath

Thanks for the chapter

Pendora10
Pendora10Lv3Pendora10

It would be better if MC gave a few world government secrets to Morgan so that Morgan could become an ally who wouldn't betray him

AngelShadow2
AngelShadow2Lv2AngelShadow2

Thx for the chapter

Kuroto
KurotoLv5Kuroto

Thanks for the chapter!

MIGGER_FTW
MIGGER_FTWLv2MIGGER_FTW

Tank yu for the chapter. Always a pleasure reading this.

Irishdamned
IrishdamnedLv14Irishdamned

I thank you for the chapter.

WolfLord
WolfLordLv14WolfLord

Thanks for the chapter on a good story.