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JJafan

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  • JJafan
    JJafan6mth
    Commented

    NONONOOONONNNOONO PLEASE KEEP IT AS GOKUXCHICHI AND 18XKRILLIN PLEEEEEASE NO MULTI FOR ONCE

    Ch 8 The New changes reveal themselves
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    I was Reincarnated as Krillin? Oh boy.
    Anime & Comics · Silverfang
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  • JJafan
    JJafan6mth
    Replied to Dark_PersonJJ

    harem and lemons is terrible

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    I was Reincarnated as Krillin? Oh boy.
    Anime & Comics · Silverfang
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  • JJafan
    JJafan11mth
    Replied to LordPhenex026

    ..

    "That's what you're doing it for, isn't it?" Gohan asked smiling before walking out of that room. Cheeli just puffed out her cheeks in annoyance.
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    I'm Gohan!
    Anime & Comics · LordPhenex026
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  • JJafan
    JJafan1yr
    Commented

    If we're a year into what would have been the three years timeskip, shouldn't Gohan be 8? Because I think I remember him being 11 when he fights Cell (unless I am mistaken). My thinking is that he is 7 when trunks arrives, then add 3 years, plus the one year in the time chamber. Again, perhaps I'm not remembering it correctly.

    From what I could tell, Gohan and Trunks still hadn't noticed that I had arrived. They both were leaps and bounds ahead of what they were last year. Trunks had gotten so powerful that I was certain that he could take on the androids of his time without a problem while the now 7-year-old Gohan had somehow managed to keep at his pace.
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    I’m Trunks
    Anime & Comics · Hrblackwater
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  • JJafan
    JJafan1yr
    Commented

    Yo author, I think it'd actually be pretty nice if you gave Monoma a younger brother, that's not normally done nowadays. It'd be a change of pace, yeah?

    Shibasaki wasn't about to listen, and she really was open to the idea of giving Neito a sibling.
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    MHA: Carbon Copy
    Anime & Comics · ImagineMaker
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  • JJafan
    JJafan1yr
    Replied to SlyKitsune

    Is bulma really a person that would allow that though? fr

    Opening her eyes wide Bulma found Raditz's face moving away, but the sensation was still fresh on her lips.
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    Dragonball : Super Raditz
    Anime & Comics · ImagineMaker
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  • JJafan
    JJafan1yr
    Commented

    Author, please, I know you want to make things look cooler, but you have to stop using ellipsis' in almost every sentence! Try to branch out more with your writing and grammar, or things can get stale after too much repetition!

    Ch 105 Chapter 105
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    One Piece: The Unreal Adventure
    Anime & Comics · Fallen_Crown
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  • JJafan
    JJafan1yr
    Replied to LiterallyGod

    Huh? that's natural strength. What my comment talks about here is potential to reach the top, which is gained through training and practice, not racial strength

    I mean I asked for one piece physique but I was thinking of people like Kaido and Big Mom at the extreme high and at least Coby at the low, but I could have been screwed over by having the potential of some cannon fodder
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    Kin To Shadows
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  • JJafan
    JJafan1yr
    Replied to VermaWyrda

    ofa is literally the transfer quirk of the first wielder and the stockpile quirk given to him combined. Ofa is not just the transfer quirk.

    OFA stockpile - High Spec, Super Regeneration
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    MHA: Carbon Copy
    Anime & Comics · ImagineMaker
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  • JJafan
    JJafan1yr
    Replied to Rillik

    NAHHHHH MAN WHYYYY

    Luffy frowned a bit… it felt good that Nami cared about him. But he wouldn't stop because of her. In fact, if he isn't strong enough, who would be the one to protect her… well, her and the rest of the crewmates. Yeah… it's not like he had any feelings for her or anything.
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    One Piece: The Unreal Adventure
    Anime & Comics · Fallen_Crown
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  • JJafan
    JJafan1yr
    Replied to Rillik

    ...huh? are you fr??

    Luffy frowned a bit… it felt good that Nami cared about him. But he wouldn't stop because of her. In fact, if he isn't strong enough, who would be the one to protect her… well, her and the rest of the crewmates. Yeah… it's not like he had any feelings for her or anything.
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    One Piece: The Unreal Adventure
    Anime & Comics · Fallen_Crown
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  • JJafan
    JJafan1yr
    Replied to Turtle034

    Just be prepared. It's VERY slow paced, and a whole bunch of the chapters (like 80% of it) is pure training. I love it though, because I like seeing progression.

    Ch 16 Before The Cave of Two Lovers
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    ATLA: An Impossible Task
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  • JJafan
    JJafan1yr
    Replied to Mamur

    Ima be honest, I completely forgot about the sharingan part. That's my bad.

    'This... Did the old man hit his head? Why did he start talking so cool for a moment? It's like I need him to tell me about the dangers of the Naruto world. Seriously, how safe can a world be in a world where Itachi (the Uchiha Patriarch's eldest son, his clan's heir, a century-old genius) went to war at the age of 4?'
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    .Dropp.ed.
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  • JJafan
    JJafan1yr
    Replied to Mamur

    ...Yeah. You just proved my point. He didn't go to war, and simply saw the aftermath of a battleground, where he unlocked his sharingan. They are not the same.

    'This... Did the old man hit his head? Why did he start talking so cool for a moment? It's like I need him to tell me about the dangers of the Naruto world. Seriously, how safe can a world be in a world where Itachi (the Uchiha Patriarch's eldest son, his clan's heir, a century-old genius) went to war at the age of 4?'
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    .Dropp.ed.
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  • JJafan
    JJafan1yr
    Commented

    Itachi never went to war. He saw a battlefield, but he never fought. C'mon, and you say you're a fan.

    'This... Did the old man hit his head? Why did he start talking so cool for a moment? It's like I need him to tell me about the dangers of the Naruto world. Seriously, how safe can a world be in a world where Itachi (the Uchiha Patriarch's eldest son, his clan's heir, a century-old genius) went to war at the age of 4?'
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    .Dropp.ed.
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  • JJafan
    JJafan1yr
    Replied to JJafan

    also, first*

    "I have decided. I want to become stronger, and then leave this small island. I want to travel everywhere in this vast sea, eat all the food, drink all the fine wine, and see the scenery."
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    One piece : voyager
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  • JJafan
    JJafan1yr
    Commented

    Y'know, that's the fist time I've seen a speech like that in a fanfic (especially chinese ones) where the mc doesn't explicitly state that they want to woo all the women in the entire world. Hoping it stays that way all the way through, but I'm not to optimistic about it.

    "I have decided. I want to become stronger, and then leave this small island. I want to travel everywhere in this vast sea, eat all the food, drink all the fine wine, and see the scenery."
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    One piece : voyager
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  • JJafan
    JJafan1yr
    Commented

    Brooo, she is a CHILD! Just send her to psychotherapy and put her on house arrest or something!

    'Sorry Azula, but you won't be burning anyone else as long as I have something to say about it.' I was determined to snuff such a wild flame.
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    ATLA: An Impossible Task
    Anime & Comics · Turtle034
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  • JJafan
    JJafan1yr
    Replied to Brutality

    actin

    Sirius just sat there with a dumbfounded look for a while before he finally found his voice and croaked, "So what— are you raising him as some kind of pig for slaughter,"
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    Sirius Black (SI)
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  • JJafan
    JJafan1yr
    Commented

    why can't i see this on your profile? and why do your other stories have no chapters?

    Ch -2 Ranks:
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    Pokemon: Chronicles of Darkness
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