Daelor
I have 3 complaints so far. 1. He isn‘t as proud as I expect a dragon to be. He was the strongest on top of the world, but now doesn‘t mind when a low level mortal makes jokes about him. 2. The romance is pretty much non existent and the female leads aren‘t really likeable either, 3. If he just need a region with denser mana, then why must he go by ship to another continent? Can’t he just fly towards the center of his current continent?
1. Him not minding that Allaire jokes about him is on purpose. It's supposed to be sort of a sign of affection, him not acting based on one of a dragons insticts out of his affection for her. 2. The lack of romance is mainly due to my writing skills concerning writing one. As for her not being likable, personal oppinion I guess. 3. While he could, even there the mana is less dense than on the central continent. Additionally he also has another reason to go there and so when a oportunity presented itself, he took it.