Comments of chapter undefined of BIOLOGICAL SUPERCOMPUTER SYSTEM
BIOLOGICAL SUPERCOMPUTER SYSTEM
PilgrimJagger
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dude on the run and trying to hide but also uses his first name and unique weapon and scores almost perfect scores...... yeah good way to keep a low profile
then why was he worried to use the flyssa when he was fighting soldiers? all im just sayingis that if all of a sudden an erik with a flyssa starts making a name for himself as a mercenary wouldnt it maybe draw attention to him that would warrent a a closer look? its not like he changed his appearance at all. i mean i really thought he was going to get a chameleon power and use it to change his hair color. you could explain the power not being noticable as another power by saying that of course a monster with chameleon powers wouldnt be noticeable because it defeats purpose of being a chameleon
PilgrimJagger:Erik is a common name; the Flyssa is not "unique" is just a Flyssa made from machines, so it's rather anonymous. There is only one thing from the Flyssa that could give him away, but you will see it in later chapters. Erik wanted to make good scores, but he wasn't aware that they would be made public. That is the only problem, if I make Erik know everything, it is clear that the book would be rather boring. There shouldn't have been a problem getting a good score, and for what concerns the Flyssa, just keep reading.