InGlorious
Hey Author, I love the story but I wanted to give a personal criticism (therefore feel free to ignore it if it isn’t helpful). I feel like in general Harry is lacking on how creatively he uses his Archmage powers, for example I don’t mind the concept of the martial art technique but it feels like Harry should have other options regarding body enhancement if he just put some thought into it. Or, even just being able to cheat through the martial art technique, he seems to be following step by step like a ‘normal’ person which just seems inefficient with his power.
As sad as it is to have to kill Kreacher, that is a smart move. He’s already proven in canon that he can visit people like Bellatrix and feed them information. Living with Sirius’s mom for years, then living alone for over a decade in such a dreary place couldn’t have done well for his psyche. It was much more humane putting him out of his misery.