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Anime mashup with omnipotent system

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primordialzeroLv2primordialzero

you should travel add to other worlds such as magic the pace of the fic is too fast and the system is too frequent each action of the mc the system intervenes and that damages personal growth and the mc does not take full advantage of the skills because he updates them at the peak and that makes the fic start to get boring but it can be improved you can 👍👌

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Only_omnipotentAuthorOnly_omnipotent

Thank you for your support. I am too inexperienced at writing novels right now, so I didn't completely understood all this but I will try to improve as I keep moving forward. Thank you

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Fabian_TelloLv1Fabian_Tello

Thanks for the chapter and the amazing job Author-sama!

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oobessLv4oobess

Thanks for the chapter. It is very cool. I'm looking forward to continuing)

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RaYaNaShLv14RaYaNaSh

i like your FF, hope you don't drop it

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tyfaaLv4tyfaa

death note is too " dark " to add it to this fic, at least IMO, FF is good though so write more 😉

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Pembaca_SetiaNovelLv1Pembaca_SetiaNovel

Although not very detailed but this is better than too much nonsense

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DARK_SAGELv4DARK_SAGE

Keep going please 🤩

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lewd_reader123Lv4lewd_reader123

it's interesting but try to make longer like what mc is doing what he is gonna do who he talking with and how he is talking and what's happening at around him i also notice that you copy bit from novel my life as tadano

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