Carrots123
This lile a rewrite of the old one. Same blonde hair, family, affiliation, relationship status, events, mannerisms, and stubbornness. The only thing that changed as far as I know is his name. That's it. Are we about to read the same thing again? One of the best from the court of owls trying to convert mc into his cult? The same father-daughter mercenary duo, now trio because he wants to get stronger? Is mc about to get captured and turned into a lab rat before awakening his superpowers? With the way you're going about this story, probably yes. This is not me flaming this story. Just me giving an honest input. I like the original one, only because it's new and refreshing take on a dc ff, but I knew it could do just a little bit more. I was happy when you rewrote the story because I thought we and some others shared the same idea. But no, its just a copy paste, change names, and polish some loose words here and there.