Comments of chapter undefined of Naruto: The Outsider's Resolve
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Takuma really needs to face some very dangerous enemies in the near future. I think it would be very interesting if Takuma become the most prolific Earth-Release Shinobi in this series & masters Gravity-Manipulation to such an extent that he can perform Gravity Telekinesis to do attacks similar to Pain's (Deva Path): Shinra Tensei (A-Rank), Chibaku Tensei (S-Rank) & Bansho Tenin (A-Rank).
S_K_0017:Takuma could be given a Mission to Spy in IWA due to his Orphan-Status, Affinity with Earth-Release, Chunin-Status & overall experience in Konoha-Police +War. This should make the basis for Takuma becoming a Shinobi in IWA & get access to these 2 Jutsus: Added-Weight Rock Technique (B-Rank), Light-Weight Rock Technique (B-Rank) & Golem-Technique (B-Rank). After coming back from IWA, Takuma should become one of the 12 Guardian of Damiyo & get to learn: Curse Soil (A-Rank), Rock Armour (A-Rank) & Swamp of the Underworld (A-Rank)
this is maaaad i really like the way this is going but the pacing is a little bit bad dont be afraid to give mc some powers bro is a genin and is close to 200 chapters as much i love this book and been here since the release of chapter 4 this is to slow do it like amj or kuroko is naruto for god sake he was supposed to be a s rank at this point bro
Thanks for the chapters. I like the pace and that it's slow progress that takuma isn't a giga Chad who slaps every one around with his eyes closed. There are enough instant op mcs out there but little hard working ones. I would have liked to see danzos behind bars because he is just so dispicable. But there are more options for antagonist with him still free so I am excited how everything plays out and what's going to happen next. Also many more opportunities to change canon. Happy days
Thanks for the chapters! Honestly I like this Danzo and Hiruzen better, they are much more realistic to war veterans that have been through a lot and whatever else they did like Danzo being a manipulator and actually being good at it in this series and the both of them having the competence to back up the reputation they had in Naruto but could not in the original, I mean Danzo right after waking up making make shift weapons shows this, so continue the good work!
