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[I'll leave here an idea of a genjutsu that Takuma could create]- -[The End (Inspired by the domain expansion of gojo/Golden Expirience Requiem)]- -[This genjutsu would be super realistic due to Takuma's future knowledge and talent, this genjutsu is particularly strong on people who have lived through various tragedies.]- -[The affected enemy will see his own "future" and that of the world around him, he will see the future of the people he loves, his village, his world and universe, with everything ending in death and tragedy, this genjutsu if not completely madden the enemy he would be listless for the rest of his life, traumatized by his experience]-
So mc will not change the future. Uchiha will die. It's sad to see how he connecting with them knowing about their death. It will be cannon story with takuma in the bottom. And in all this time he will have his own story with criminal drama and problems one from another. I see he will always be weaker than famous konoha shinobi
I really like the way this Naruto fic is written. It's a breath of fresh air from those fics where the MC is a once-in-a-generation genius transmigrator. The story is realistic to me in terms of what would happen when an average Joe from Earth gets reincarnated into Naruto. He struggles every time, but after those struggles, waiting for each chapter, he succeeds or wins. It's an immediate dopamine rush to my headâthe satisfaction of finally winning. I like stories like this because in a story, you get to experience things with the characters, and reading that they finally succeed is satisfying, like a nice shower after a workout. I do think the pacing should be a little faster, but that's it. I hope the author won't be demoralized to write seeing all the reviews that are bashing the fictional world he is making. I hope you won't drop this story of yours and not be part of the thousands of fics that are dropped never reaching the end. TvT why can't I post a review? I can make one bet can't seem to post one I can't see any button to do so
These chapters were...... so human. So genuine, realistic, deep...... Definitely the best naruto fan fic. Although I say thinking it's a bit slow. That's also what makes it unique. Since unlike others with slow development, here you are part of it. You can feel every improvement. You motivated me to come back to your patreon. Although I would recommend you to increase the weekly chapters. 15 dollars is an unconscionably high amount. Thanks for the chapters.
You know,he going to have to answer the question of were he gotten his scars eventually.He is so covered in them that itâs his identity in the ring.Maybe he has to change clothes in a mission,or maybe just simple curiosity,but someone is going to ask the question. Takuma will open himself to someone enough to the point where they will be comfortable enough to ask,and he will have to have a answer,especially if that person is a loved one.Still,I wonder what Mikoto thinks of Takuma now that she knows about Takuma involvement in the ring;will Mikoto be the person to finally ask about his scars?Wondering how a little boy can get so many scars even before he left the academy.People have started digging(makes sense considering that Takuma is making some big waves)and they want to know about more about Takuma,and those scars and more are going to be on that list of things they want to know more about.This is going to be a problem eventually,as the real Takuma past might catch up to him and screw him over.Takuma got to be ready for this,as the person,or people who did this to original Takuma killed him.Maybe.We donât really know what happened.Maybe reincarnation,transmigration,or a merger of the two souls,who knows.Ether way,Takuma needs an answer,or he might get in trouble.