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sweet_bananas9mthCommentedI really like the way this Naruto fic is written. It's a breath of fresh air from those fics where the MC is a once-in-a-generation genius transmigrator. The story is realistic to me in terms of what would happen when an average Joe from Earth gets reincarnated into Naruto. He struggles every time, but after those struggles, waiting for each chapter, he succeeds or wins. It's an immediate dopamine rush to my head—the satisfaction of finally winning. I like stories like this because in a story, you get to experience things with the characters, and reading that they finally succeed is satisfying, like a nice shower after a workout. I do think the pacing should be a little faster, but that's it. I hope the author won't be demoralized to write seeing all the reviews that are bashing the fictional world he is making. I hope you won't drop this story of yours and not be part of the thousands of fics that are dropped never reaching the end. TvT why can't I post a review? I can make one bet can't seem to post one I can't see any button to do so
Ch 136 CH_4.36 (136)- sweet_bananas11mthReplied to sweet_bananas
idc if I commented late, a meme is a meme
All the captains can be seen doing various things while waiting. Fuegoleon was sharing his experience regarding the work of Captain with Rill as he became a captain a few months ago. Nozel could be seen eyes closed and trying hard not to listen to anyone's blabbering, Dorothy is asleep as always, Charlotte is taking a few glances at Yami when he is not looking. Jack is telling something to Yami who is sharpening his sword, it's doubtful that if Yami is even listening. Gueldre is calculating how much profit he made recently. Lastly William is watching everyone with a fascination. - sweet_bananas11mthReplied to Immortle_diablo123
aka "Braided Bangs"
All the captains can be seen doing various things while waiting. Fuegoleon was sharing his experience regarding the work of Captain with Rill as he became a captain a few months ago. Nozel could be seen eyes closed and trying hard not to listen to anyone's blabbering, Dorothy is asleep as always, Charlotte is taking a few glances at Yami when he is not looking. Jack is telling something to Yami who is sharpening his sword, it's doubtful that if Yami is even listening. Gueldre is calculating how much profit he made recently. Lastly William is watching everyone with a fascination. - sweet_bananas11mthCommentedCh 215 Chapter 212 : Elite Jounin Promotion???
- sweet_bananas11mthCommented
I always thought it was stupid for the hokage to do all the paperwork why not hire a secretary or something?
In the most famous building in Konoha, an old man, smoking with a smoking pipe, was staring out of the window. Behind him, a table full of papers, which needed his signature. Hiruzen Sarutobi, however, continued to stare out of the window at the 4th Hokage's monument. Today was exactly a year, since Konoha had to face Nine Tails assault. Hiruzen finally let out a sigh. Konoha suffered the most losses of any village in the 3rd great ninja war due to having to fight every village. And merely a year later, they had to face another assault which not only killed the 4th Hokage, but also a lot of their ninjas and civilians. This not only increased the burden on him and existing ninjas, but also caused Konoha's orphanage to be overpopulated. Hiruzen sighed again, finally starting his day by getting that damned paperwork done. - sweet_bananas1yrCommented
I like that the first thing that came to everyone's mind is the Slytherin symbol
I looked at the dark green snake engraving on the sleeves of my blazer. - sweet_bananas1yrReplied to lolbingolol
- sweet_bananas1yrReplied to Danatos_2000
- sweet_bananas1yrPosted
I'm up to chapter 30 right now. The novel is generic, as if any other person were to reincarnate as a novel-type scenario. But the writing quality is irritating, and I don't mean the grammar; rather, the manner the author writes the story is irksome; I can't count how many times the protagonist breaches the fourth wall, which makes me cringe at times, and there are simply too many info dumps.
- sweet_bananas1yrReplied to Haremphobic_01
like literally I am just dragging my self to read incase the novel get's better
The characters weren't one dimensional and the plot was not really full of cliches. I simply exaggerated what I said to Joe in my last moments.