Comments of chapter undefined of Naruto: The Outsider's Resolve
Naruto: The Outsider's Resolve
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I'm not good at English either, so don't worry. This Fanfiction is hands down my favorite about Naruto for the very same reason. However this research that he did a lot of work on, looks like a copy taken from Wikipedia on how to do an investigation. He presented it well and fits well into the context, but my question is… was it necessary? If the author likes it, it means it's okay that it's there and I'm not complaining. I repeat. I like It, but to me, it is not necessary.
Ahmed_Rashad_6653:i really,made, deepest apologies for my bad english
Did they have cameras in Naruto? Been a while since I watched it. Wouldn't they just use dog summons to sniff out criminals quickly? Especially since the suspect doesnt seem to be a ninja this time around. I thought Takuma was in the organised crime division not the homicide division, why is he at what seems to be an ordinary murder case?
author you did it again. this is too much information. even if it makes sense for all this to be discussed. It is often better to simplify things to avoid making unnecessary exposition that the readers don’t need to know. People often think that more detail means better but too much detail will make your story too slow. setting things that you want to happen in a chapter can help or make the problem worse. but you could have definitely fit interogations, or at least one that is important to follow the investigation. Because all that we got from this chapter was that now takuma is an asistant in a murder investigation of a woman, and that 6 people where in the scene.
