Comments of chapter undefined of Villain Is on Vacation

I'm here for the novel man. Please don't lecture things. Your novel is really not great but it helps me to alleviating my boredom and to run away from my reality. Many novels do that. Many readers do what I do. You probably won't get support here. So, Please just write about the story. Think about making it better. Expand it. Refine it. The livestream idea is not working for me so do better on it. Like you know tell his adventure in the island to the audience. Songs really don't get through reading right. hais just write and better your craft.