You proclaim yourself as man of culture when all you like is the boobs then you my friend is comparable to that of a baby.It is the butts the deserve the praise and looks.
Yep, all I can do is imagine. It's a dream like no other
Phew thought I'd see another swordmanship lvl1 in profession
LOL what? I mean I guess it could but you really have better things to do than this. Cultivation world as I would imagine it is as long as those at the top are strong enough, then nothing will happen really bad.
The moment this appeared in the story, I feel the ordinariness of upcoming chaps. An endgame is already here what is there to expect. Some godhood template by the end.
What is this the bare bears?
One tooth less 😂
Your waifu just became a reality. I am quite jealous.
I have mixed feelings about this novel. How can he just trust people like that? I might have trust issues, but 5 days and you can leave your back to somebody else. You have guts to be killed. If I knew they were regressors, I would not be so trusting especially when there is 4 of them. He already has doubts why not not have precautionary measures then. The novel is great and all but the mc is just dumb as f*ck.
At this point, Special forces would probably be in charge not just cops.
Yes YEs YESS!!!! You start with the child. You then let the child beguile his parents then let the parents beguile their friends so that they can also beguile their families. World Domination is at HANDDDDDD.....
Cliche like you know this right. I would go for a more of a friend is the mastermind and know future kind of thing then backstab you still this life
I must say I like the novel. I just don't like how the characters develop. Edward or Nyrel should get hold of himself. Where is the crazed like character at the beginning. He followed her to this world right or something like that. Why the heck is he turning to a slave like character. Is this based on something like denji from chainsaw man. I feel disturbed reading this. Also slowing the pace of the story at this point is somewhat counterproductive. Mysteries has to atleast be partly uncovered you know.
Congratulations! You have created a Darth Vader
This is the turning point if this goes like a "SSS-Class Suicide Hunter" like romance scene. Villainess teaching love to the mc. We will then have a denji for goodness sake
I'm here for the novel man. Please don't lecture things. Your novel is really not great but it helps me to alleviating my boredom and to run away from my reality. Many novels do that. Many readers do what I do. You probably won't get support here. So, Please just write about the story. Think about making it better. Expand it. Refine it. The livestream idea is not working for me so do better on it. Like you know tell his adventure in the island to the audience. Songs really don't get through reading right. hais just write and better your craft.
Reading this makes me cringe somehow. Destruction is an overused word in fantasy. You could have gone for example with 'Akala's Forgotten Lance Art' then go for destruction or whatever for the signature moves of the art. You could then have a ministory about the creator of the art that somehow correlates with the current timeline of the story. You know what I mean. Side stories are fun sometimes as it builds the world around the main character. You just need the side story to be short like 1 chapter long for the longest.
Are you sure about practicing this technique? Like really bro? How old are to not realize?