Comments of chapter undefined of Just Another Multiverse Chat Group
Just Another Multiverse Chat Group
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Chapter comments25
The story is great I only have two suggestions, the time it takes in between the next chapter should be shortened or atleast there is an allocated scheduled release on the same days at the same time because people tend to remember or anticipate those kind of things when the releases are somewhat erratic or random it’s easy for people to forget or pay attention to when it comes out so it’s better if it’s more scheduled and there’s an authors note at the end and beginning telling the viewers And my second suggestion is in the name you should try and make it more unique so it’s easier to differentiate it with other novels with similar titles, similar to how you put a new cover image, it allows it to really pop when people are looking through novels and what to read and by adding a unique title it allows people to easily file theyre memory of the progression of the story because there are a lot times when a new release comes out and your wondering which is this one since there’s a bunch with similar name and let me tell you for those with a huge library it’s a common occurrence and it deters you from going into the chapter or novel
good pace, there has to be a little adventuring to help enjoy the different worlds and the people we've read about, id probably have liked them to be after the tutorial stage since these adventures seem pretty dangerous and he's met too many beings above his weight class already, I guess you could say its unlikely you wouldn't be discovered by those beings but that tutorial status should compensate for that in someway. seems more like regular missions but still great!
