Zerufuke081205
love it. you asked for ideas, so I'll recommend a couple things. 1. make sure hela doesn't fall, I like this brother sister relationship and hope you expand on it. wish you will Also do the same with thor and loki. I've seen to much thor and loki bashing where the Mc could have molded them but instead didn't care and it bit him later on. 2. whether you decide on harem or non harem it's your choice tbh please don't put Jean Grey, black widow or black cat as the mcs love interest cause it's so overdone and so stupid when better options for example like wanda or a humbled ms marvel is avaliable 3. don't make him an edgelord. marvel fanfic Mc tend to be either simp ultra hero complex or edgelords. just be either a mix or in the middle. rn it's good, he realistic wants to conquer the world, but make it so when he does conquer its not only to satisfy his own greed but also to make the universe a better place. that's all tbh so far other than the word count which I wish it would be a bit more the story is amazing. good luck my friend.