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Comments of chapter undefined of My Roleplay System

ResidentialPsycho
ResidentialPsychoLv15ResidentialPsycho

Changing the POV is fine. If you feel that would express the story better, then why not go for it?

Reaper_Souls
Reaper_SoulsLv5Reaper_Souls

Um, to be honest, I wouldn’t mind if you switched to first person, however, due to us being used to you writing in third person, I would suggest you slowly incorporate first person POV from time to time while still writing in third person POV. Until you completely change switch to first person later down the road. But anywho thanks for the chapter and I hope your eventually able to write on a continuous basis at your own pace that is!

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VanillaExodia
VanillaExodiaLv4VanillaExodia

Why not use both persopectivs

Michicotan
MichicotanLv15Michicotan

i agree with the rest - go with the change, but slowly integrate it, and you can also use both. Some other stories start the POV from different characters and just start with: "CharacterName's POV:"

Lord_Fate_Master
Lord_Fate_MasterLv5Lord_Fate_Master

keep going as you want, just don't make it cringe

I_Am_Death
I_Am_DeathLv15I_Am_Death

Thanks For The Chapter