Comments of chapter undefined of KanoKari: A Different Life
KanoKari: A Different Life
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Author very good your novel so far. It's been a while since I found one that hooked me. The only thing I ask of you is that you don't do as in a comment you made that he was with several girls and then get rid of them and stay with one. For my part, Il prefer that he stay with all those that are related to him in the anime. And please, what I ask of you the most is that you are not going to put any of them with some other guy or that they NTR the protagonist.
From the little that I have been told about the series, Mami is the best, yes she is manipulative but with so many heroines and none progressing by more than 200+ Caps; That there is one that really shakes things up in the story is what makes it superior. Can anyone confirm? I'm not going to watch the series. Chizuru at least as they are portraying her here is a super boring and problematic
TBH.. The way the characters are talking in a dialogue feels dry.. Needs something like "Hes/she said".. "He/she thought inwardly".. And many more additional words to make it more for the readers to understand.. NGL every reaction of every characters feels Bland and please use "!?" or just "I" if necessary... Thanks for the Chapter
