Arsone
Don't get me wrong its a great story so far but the author really needs to get a.proofreader the author must not be very good at English yet
Hmm, yes, you're not wrong. Indeed, English is a language that is not mastered by me. I'm not good in that area. While looking for an editor, well, for now there is still no thought of doing this. Paying for an editor yourself is quite expensive and at the moment I can't do that unless I'm already a big writer and have a large income to pay for an editor. For now, enjoy all that I am about to write. Hope you like it.