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nice explanation really interesting and heart touching[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I liked the beginning, but the chapters were too long. Usually, I don't read so much at once, but that's alright.
The chapter is well described...I didn't watch anime so it's going to be a new story for me....
Looks good thanks for the chapter đ
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Inspired from Tokyo Ghoul? I remembered it was a good anime. đ€ Hope the novel's same. [img=recommend]
I really enjoyed the chapter! Its so well written that I could easly imagine everything, especially the café.
loving the interaction between two main character đ€đ€đ€
Interesting premise
Long chapter, with plenty of details. Very nice
I love the opening if this book. The author did a good job right there .
It was a lil confusing to read for me. still it was good.đđ»
The first chapter has a goal, but mechanical inaccuracies and a few paraphrasing mistakes make it a little difficult to follow. But the story seems good.
I don't read anime so it was a little bit hard to understand but I like the fact that it is not too long and it is really interesting
Good start!
Nice! I enjoyed lots~ looking forward to reading the next one!
decent start
Off to a great start. I could see the similarities between Tokyo Ghoul and this chapter. I also love Tokyo Ghoul. Amazing first chapter.
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its start in a very good way... liked the character Iris... she is really funnyđ...