SixthSense1029
Bth author I don't like the concept where the MC tells his friends/loved one that he/she was reincarnated, even if it's a dream or whatsoever. In transmigration/reincarnation genre, the MC should never at any case reveal that. I know you want to do a new thing and all but most of readers including myself don't like this approach. The concept of reincarnation/transmigration is that a character has a chance to enjoy/improve his another life again without thinking about his previous one but instead incorporate/use his knowledge of his previous life to the new one. I would say the thing you did is a dumb move. Reveal your past life is notable bright idea, even if I have a chance to have a new life through reincarnation/transmigration, I would never reveal that even in my tomb. This is my opinion/criticism on this topic. I say what I need to say. this is your novel and you do whatever you want to do with it but I just want to share my opinion on it
Well, I really dont like it. Not only the fact that he tell it to someone, but he even make a meeting and call other people to tell it. When a Mc tell someone I really find it annoying but if its look like a really good story I could go on. But in this case, I cant go on, he made a meeting to tell everyone about the reincarnation.
I don't care about anything else, but my goodness is this feeling like a drag to read. It's way too slow paced and there are a lot of unnecessary scenes and conversations. It's not able to grasp my attention. Whatever interest I had at the start had faded away. I'm sorry if this feels hurtful, Author. But so far, it's been really boring. The only slightly interesting part was maybe the whole memory watching and the conversation between MMA fight Samurai nerd and the kid.
Is this worth reading looks like he is just stupid for telling his secrets, I read novels that tell their past life but not this early most of them are in middle or late in story and that for a reason. I honestly think this is stupid writing I mean its awkward now to start this novel aside from naming this bs happen now it make me bad taste continuing this novel. Some say he is just 6 yr old and other will think he just making imagination so whats the point then for making him tell his past life if other see him as chuuni child you just making him look like a retard