Felegranco
Author let me correct a few mistakes for you : - Arthur's family name is Leywin, not Levin; - The princess's name is Kathyln Glayder, it's pronunciation is not Catlin at all, but it is a derivation; - Not quite a mistake but I highly recommend you to use certain codes to use when writing, when a character is speaking use "dialogue", 'thought'. The - is just disturbing and kinda useless, sometimes you even use the dialogue signs to write their thoughts.