Comments of chapter undefined of Primordial 'Dual Cultivator' Dragon With System

there is nowhere wrong with your writing or grammer a few spots but as a native English speaker. It flows and is very readable. keep it up and don't listen to others if they can do better they should write. Great chapter brother and thanks for it great job and the rewrite cheers!

Ignore those haters ngl, they forever have a thing to complain about. So excited for best girl to slowly cave in to MC xD

you're grammar is quite good author. don't know who complained ...tell them to read journey to become true God 😂😂😂then they will shut up

Don't worry about the haters trying to drag others down into their miserable lives. You have better grammar with English than a bunch of people that I know that have spoken it their whole lives. Don't let these trolls get to you and just spend time with family, updating as you please.

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

I know how hard it is to juggle all that except for the 4 languages Personally I applaud your efforts and am humbled by your dedication! You are a great author and I don't believe anyone else has the right to say otherwise

Your grammar is quite good. There are some weird sentence sometimes but it doesn’t bother me. I understand being a writer is difficult. Even more when it is not your first job. I think most of the readers understand that. But you have to understand the other side too. Your story is very good so far. So, it’s quite frustrating when we see some errors. I know it’s very very demanding for you but it’s part of your job and we, readers, pay for it.

I am only fluent in 2 languages. sarcasm and English. not so good on thé English though.....

your grammar is fine. keep working on it. some idiots are just hating on you because you can do something they can not.

I dont think the grammer is bad Sounds like somEone is being a hater when this is perfectly great novel

English is hard to write with perfect grammar because you know that here and there will always be mistakes. Since english is his 4th language. Main point is that he can make the story interesting in reading with noone complaining about story not liable to be read.

I have no complaints...ok maybe one and thats cliffhangers but other than that looking forward to more chapters

Спасибо за главу

preach it. gods cursed grammar sadists

Is this a repost as I have read thi story befores

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