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Comments of chapter undefined of One Piece - I Am A Different Luffy!

ClemSama
ClemSamaLv10ClemSama

nope , chapter is ok but doesn't fit in the story , just continue your original story , if you start over you open a door & will be tempted to do it again : result : you will never finish it , like maybe 90% of the fics created here , jutst stick with the orginal

Eclipso_roar
Eclipso_roarLv4Eclipso_roar

Make them into flashbacks

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Jama1810
Jama1810Lv4Jama1810

It’s a good chapter, but it doesn’t really fit the story I think you are actually trying to write

EddyZ
EddyZLv14EddyZ

If you want you could just to short flashbacks every now and then, but this changes the entire theme and feeling of the story. Don’t really like it. It’s not very captivating and to be honest I dislike child Luffy story’s as I just feel like they wasting time till the actual story starts.

roland_octavius
roland_octaviusLv4roland_octavius

You could edit the first chapter and make this as a flashback of sorts

world_domination
world_dominationLv4world_domination

I like it adds flavor

Daoist_CloudySky
Daoist_CloudySkyLv13Daoist_CloudySky

create like a flashback of past episodes, but don't re do the whole thing. continue the story as it has been going 👍

Dhaliwal2
Dhaliwal2Lv6Dhaliwal2

It's good just replace it as first chapter and change the few things you wish to change in the beginning. Then continue the story as it is.

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THE_RATFACE_MAN
THE_RATFACE_MANLv4THE_RATFACE_MAN

thanks for the chapter xxxxxx

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guilherme99gc
guilherme99gcLv14guilherme99gc

[img=gift][img=recommend] Thank you for the chapter ⭐⭐⭐⭐☁️ [img=recommend][img=gift].

LeonardoDiCaprio1
LeonardoDiCaprio1Lv4LeonardoDiCaprio1

good chapter keep it up

House_Bread
House_BreadLv4House_Bread

imo if you're feeling this sort of setting just write another story my guy. if you feel weird about writing another story with such a similar premise ... don't. those small changes at the beginning can have huge impacts on the overall story and progression.

RICHARD_JR_CORPIN
RICHARD_JR_CORPINLv1RICHARD_JR_CORPIN

Just make a bits flashback, like when he saw his sister, let him monologue anit of his head but that's it... don't make an entire chapter for it it will be boring...it will also add a bit of mystery on what are the effects of his transmigration on the one piece world...

nari_yuki
nari_yukiLv12nari_yuki

If you really want you can make after grandline you can take that title flashback. but i think don't need that bro it's just what i think

SirJuan_Juan
SirJuan_JuanLv14SirJuan_Juan

Good Chapter 👍

Anitimesc
AnitimescLv14Anitimesc

Oh Lucy will be luffy waifu awesome

almond_tofu66
almond_tofu66Lv4almond_tofu66

this good for flashback

Lucifer_777
Lucifer_777Lv3Lucifer_777

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_Marked_
_Marked_Lv13_Marked_

I guess if you want back story, you can just make occational flashback when needed... I'm not really sure what I feel in including these, but follow what you think is best! (except for lemons. Option 2 for lemons. Non negotiable)

Murod
MurodLv3Murod

not