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Comments of chapter undefined of One Piece - I Am A Different Luffy!

Bdrii
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Author, who is lucy?

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ItsDragonking
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Arnab_Panday
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Author, can you post the pictures in comments? Many of us, including myself, can't see it.

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LeonardoDiCaprio1
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This is good start If you keep this pace up it will be great and make mc little more prideful what about Lucy will join mc crew or what.anyway good it's a good chapter keep it up

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Cruel_Vamp
Cruel_VampLv5Cruel_Vamp

this makes the story seem to have a better flow

CyanideOverdose
CyanideOverdoseLv6CyanideOverdose

Why a sister? makes no sense to add her

Melshan
MelshanLv7Melshan

As the MC is an OC and not the so-called protagonist of the world either, his name should be something else and not Luffy. Please don't make the MC wear that ugly/horrible straw hat, obviously the crew's name has to be different too.

Venerable_DogLover
Venerable_DogLoverLv4Venerable_DogLover

So what happens to Gomu Gomu fruit then? Does it pick another host or cease to exist?

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MercenaryRollen
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👍👍👍

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Rend0rf
Rend0rfLv4Rend0rf

better start

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DevilOnUrShoulder
DevilOnUrShoulderLv14DevilOnUrShoulder

well 10/10 for writing quality the details where great and the flash backs flow nicely with the rest anyway I'm not great at feedback but I Cant complain thanks for the chapter and keep up the good work

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carlos435
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Thx

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DragonkingKyo
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thanks for the chapter

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WolfLord
WolfLordLv14WolfLord

Thanks for the chapter on a good story.

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Justin2331
Justin2331Lv4Justin2331

thanks for the chapter 🙏

Dark_Crow_
Dark_Crow_Lv3Dark_Crow_

My brain can't picture Nika in the navy, but other than that it's fine.

Reiya9
Reiya9Lv4Reiya9

First chapter is really trash and just confusing more than anything. The whole adding a sister is just bad. Secondly luffy transforming into some macho man is terrible and looks dumb. Thirdly the fact that the story is pretty much identical to the normal story even with all these changes as adding a sister is just lazy.

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topak
topakLv14topak

So hes not oc, same mc with diff soul and fruit

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Arnaldo_Fernandez_7967
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Gran capitulo

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SCP_UnKnown
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