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Comments of chapter undefined of One Piece: Limitlessness

Luzx
LuzxLv13Luzx

So i will Just put this book in na break, until get at the chapter 80, and just read everything in a row

IkeBladeWarrior
IkeBladeWarriorLv14IkeBladeWarrior

Being "Dark" it's not the problem, it's that it feels as if you as the author, enjoy tormenting and torturing the MC. Even in places like say Warhammer 40K even the "Heroes" sometimes win, the majority of them in a Pyrrhic victory, but there are a few that are not filled with suffering. And even then it's not a problem, because those character known that it's going to be a suffering life or battle. Here the MC is lost, so it feels as if he is being tortured for sport and laughs, just like a slave.

Ruckducker
RuckduckerLv4Ruckducker

I dont mind misfortune/dark themes the only thing i hate is you constantly crippling your mc

Sarthak_Hooda
Sarthak_HoodaLv4Sarthak_Hooda

At this point, after seeing the new stat, I would just off myself if I didn't even ask for any of this. With how much he has gone through and will go through anyone would break. When he does overcome Limitless, he would just be a husk of himself. At that point the person would just be broken and with the amount of power he would accumulate, it would just be a Massacre. Killing everything on site, out of caution, like What if it hurts him? What if it's after him? etc, etc.

Herb_6573
Herb_6573Lv4Herb_6573

it's not because the story is dark it your decisions with the Mc

knightInSpikyArmor
knightInSpikyArmorLv2knightInSpikyArmor

Why y'all so obsessed with those nanny systems? This's a breath of fresh air.

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Whoruman
WhorumanLv4Whoruman

Nah, keep it as you plan cuz so far it's been awesome!

HaracasAye
HaracasAyeLv4HaracasAye

This story is nowhere near dark. I cant believe ppl are actually complaining about it. What, hes lost an arm, fought mafia, been severly injured and is now being hunted by pirates? That sounds like par for the course in a world dominated by pirates. And its not like hes powerless against the circumstances. Author keep doing what your doing, dont worry about these bird brained readers who cannot appreciate a slow burn story.

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QuiteSarcastic
QuiteSarcasticLv4QuiteSarcastic

To be honest, outside of the anime, the world of once piece is actually quite dark, yet with an mc on the side exploring that said "darkness" is a good twist. And quite refreshing to read I gotta admit. Keep up the good work ^^

Blast_Niro
Blast_NiroLv4Blast_Niro

I get what you're trying to get at and to be honest, almost every backstory in one piece is dark but because it's mostly depicted in a flashback readers couldn't really experience it unlike your work here where we experience it with the character. but here's my question to help me and others understand your fanfic more, are you gonna keep the will of the author Oda in this world? or is it gonna be like your work in HxH ?

WHAT_NO_MONEY
WHAT_NO_MONEYLv13WHAT_NO_MONEY

The story isn't dark in the slightest... I would just say its not fluffy and thats beung generous.

Akatsuki_Kyosuke
Akatsuki_KyosukeLv4Akatsuki_Kyosuke

Is it possible for him to regain his arm back thru limitless??

Nyeh_IamSkeletor
Nyeh_IamSkeletorLv4Nyeh_IamSkeletor

k

JSirMixalotL
JSirMixalotLLv4JSirMixalotL

I don't mind the "darkness". The story is just too slow in my opinion. But good writing and grammar

pratiksymbol
pratiksymbolLv4pratiksymbol

Man I hope that at the end your MC obtains Death Inducing Haki after all the pain and hardship. Like a simple release of haki will instantly kill the main mind and soul of a creature. At least this is what MC should get after his hardship.

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ggg_alttab
ggg_alttabLv4ggg_alttab

keep it going bro been a fan since the hxh fic. Your mc's abilites are always interesting and its fun to see how they develop it.

XLIV
XLIVLv11XLIV

Seriously tho you should prolly just kill off mc, idk if you’re going through some s/m stuff but I think mc has suffered enough. He’ll prolly be mentally scarred and never have a peaceful life so it’s better to end it.

Thehighest_throne2
Thehighest_throne2Lv1Thehighest_throne2

i am ok with dark theme but not with stupid mc.

DeejaeSutherland
DeejaeSutherlandLv14DeejaeSutherland

You say his luck went up to 893, yet he somehow comes across a legendary swordsmen who is in the sky

leo26
leo26Lv11leo26

This better have a god level payoff my guy.