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Comments of chapter undefined of Face-Slapping System

First_Account_1462
First_Account_1462Lv3First_Account_1462

where's the 6 bonus chapter

warriorofnorth
warriorofnorthLv15warriorofnorth

author how about buying soul link ability from the system? the mc can link his soul with anyone he want and they will share his power and abilitys same like his special guards but they will be 1 level lower then him, and there will be conditions the person must be willing and not resist soul link and if the person think of betraying or think of revealing mc secret then the soul link will be broken and the person will forget about everything related to soul link and mc secrets and he lose all powers he gaind coz of the broken link, the mc will not soul link with just anyone he will chose them carefully depend on their moral and charactors he doesnt want arrogant or bullys, so mc can make a special division in the security company tasked with guarding VIP or important places, they can also do tasks for mc if he need help with something

warriorofnorth
warriorofnorthLv15warriorofnorth

about this soul link i talked about its not like that razor guy, they will not be mc slaves, they will have their own free will and can do whatever they want they can even refuse orders but as i said if they think of betraying or think about revealing mc secret the link will be broken and they will lose and forget everything and the mc can also break the link anytime he want and they forget everything etc, so thats why he will not choose anyone and choose them on their moral and charactors and loyality

Lord_Xavier_21
Lord_Xavier_21Lv15Lord_Xavier_21

you should name the company "system security". also if you are against harem then dont make it one. just stacy and janine. they are good characters. if you ad more it will make your life harder and it will also start to drag down the story. ive seen it several times from even good authors. harem is hard to write and can easily ruin the story. so 2 girls is fine. please if anything do not go past 3. it is expensive to read on webnovel and i dont want to waste my money to find a story i liked turn into garbage.

Daoist372769
Daoist372769Lv14Daoist372769

very nice chapter.💯👍😁 thanks for chapter!.

Tvntx9
Tvntx9Lv15Tvntx9

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

SJD_R
SJD_RLv3SJD_R

update

Master_Sargeant
Master_SargeantLv3Master_Sargeant

if you run out of ideas why don't you just end the story don't keep us waiting for so long

Master_Sargeant
Master_SargeantLv3Master_Sargeant

this author is so lazy

DL_Mondays
DL_MondaysLv11DL_Mondays

is this dropped ?

RAMINATOR
RAMINATORLv15RAMINATOR

Hi! Just started this novel not too long ago and have read my way through it up to this point. I like it a lot and have been waiting a few days for a new chapter but so far no luck. Are you ok Author? Please continue this book. I rarely enjoy modern day settings in novels but I love how you do it with this novel.

First_Account_1462
First_Account_1462Lv3First_Account_1462

next chapter!!!!!!!

First_Account_1462
First_Account_1462Lv3First_Account_1462

next chapter!!!