dude... your story is very good, and the plot is very well constructed, but I have a doubt about the future, does your story intend to address the universe of fate or is it a story with its own line?
bro I'm an Indian too but i didn't know about karna that much only little bit but bro now I want to know what if karna was alive all that so thank you keep it up
i like your story, i wait for it everyday. take your time, write whenever you want. but please if you want to go on hiatus, tell us some chapter before hiatus