I don't mind fast pace as long as the story actually gets complete, lol. You've been doing a great job with the constant updates and your story is turning out really well so far. Excited to see more.
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wouldn't say the story is wow but it is going fine. Although try and break up the bigger paragraphs to make it more pleasing to read I'd say. Keep it up!