Comments of chapter undefined of In House of The Dragon being the last noble of Valyrian Freehold
I like the concept think you're doing pretty good job the writing is okay I didn't see too many flaws or anything so I say that you're doing pretty well I do recommend however that you post at least five chapters within the next few hours otherwise people only see one chapter in there and not going to be really interested in reading it and maybe tomorrow post another five chapters I can't say for other people and there experience but for my experience at least 10 chapters in a new book is good to go read you know I'll be interested in clicking on it and reading it and putting in my library if I like it but otherwise it has less than 10 or so chapters it's hard for me to want to click on it because there have been a lot of authors on this site that stop writing at 2 or 3 chapters and you think that they'll continue writing cuz it's a new thing but then they stop and you wait a couple months and they don't come back in fact just the other day I deleted several of these novels out of my library I'm not saying that's what you're going to do I just recommend you have plenty of chapters for people to look at in the beginning so that they want to read it put in their library and continue to read it
Ok I’m interested however small thing though I don’t like the name of the family it just doesn’t sound “Valyrian” given that we only have “Targaryen” and “Belaerys” so maybe use that or House Denaerys or Benhaerion or something that sounds Valyrian like taking the ”aeryen” or ”aerys” final sounds from Valyrian or the “aerion” from Balerion the main Valyrian god or at least one of the Valyrian gods.
