FerriticMatrix
I really enjoyed reading this
The Names... are hard...
names are almost too similar, who is who. Cant lie i dont like this first chapter being a big battle where we dont know who is who and whats at stake, feels boring and wants to stop reading
too many names right away its so confusing
Very confusing can't describe clearly
It may just be my paranoia talking but when the enemy is not reacting appropriately to the situation, I must suspect that they know something I don't.
I think this sets a good scene to what the author wants his story to be about. It’s intriguing to me
So many info dumping I dont even know what tf is happening and who is who. Too detail make it stupid.
I’m loving the chapter there’s actual plot unlike most other novels.The names however are pretty confusing and requires some effort to keep track of.
THX
hmm…
okay, I love this, it sounds intelligent and different from what I read on WN everyday