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Comments of chapter undefined of Herald of Steel

Aggu37
Aggu37Lv2Aggu37

I really enjoyed reading this

Ancient_Egyptian
Ancient_EgyptianLv13Ancient_Egyptian

The Names... are hard...

PrehistoricDevil
PrehistoricDevilLv12PrehistoricDevil

names are almost too similar, who is who. Cant lie i dont like this first chapter being a big battle where we dont know who is who and whats at stake, feels boring and wants to stop reading

BlackRoseDragon
BlackRoseDragonLv15BlackRoseDragon

too many names right away its so confusing

TheFooL
TheFooLLv11TheFooL

Very confusing can't describe clearly

jselvy
jselvyLv14jselvy

It may just be my paranoia talking but when the enemy is not reacting appropriately to the situation, I must suspect that they know something I don't.

R3Scribes
R3ScribesLv15R3Scribes

I think this sets a good scene to what the author wants his story to be about. It’s intriguing to me

Gundar_Varr
Gundar_VarrLv1Gundar_Varr

So many info dumping I dont even know what tf is happening and who is who. Too detail make it stupid.

DaoistQxPoje
DaoistQxPojeLv11DaoistQxPoje

I’m loving the chapter there’s actual plot unlike most other novels.The names however are pretty confusing and requires some effort to keep track of.

Melshan
MelshanLv7Melshan

THX

Thymetro
ThymetroLv13Thymetro

hmm…

RighteousFilth
RighteousFilthLv13RighteousFilth

okay, I love this, it sounds intelligent and different from what I read on WN everyday