Comments of chapter undefined of The Breaking of Fate [High Quality]

This FF used to be so much fun but now just meh.

half of the story is just explaining about the hundred seal jutsu. I know the author likes to increase the word count, but at this point it is affecting the quality of the novel. The plot is barely moving forward, it just goes to show that author has not planned the upcoming plot and is just wasting time making the story so unnecessarily long.

it's very tiring. when he defeated the head of his clan, a new enemy appeared, when the battle with the new enemy (obito) ended, a new enemy appeared (Tsunade and her gang), I hope no one else will appear. fanfic began to give off a "taste" of some kind of Chinese .. it feels like you are a Chinese (or a Chinese killed the last author and appropriated his fanfic ... and we all know when this happened ...)

if some cannon characters do not die and are just left after getting seriously injured i m dropping this

One whole chapter, half of it filled with useless info dumps and the other half filled with barely any plot. This is getting out of hand author. I don't and can not control your story but take the thoughts of your readers into consideration. At this rate, people won't be eager to read your story like they used to. Please, just limit the info dumps and stop worrying about the word count, this platform isn't paying you for that...

The last few chapters have felt very exhausting to read, not sure if it's the over exposition, the ridiculous power creeping, or the excessive inner thoughts, but it has been a hard read for me.

Man story had a non famous character from a under utilised clan. I was hoping for something different. Still now obito knows about his weakness hence making him difficult to defeat (unless Karin makes something like anti appration wards of hp verse which basically locks space ) But I suppose it’s butterfly effect and mentality change after 14 yrs of slave life.

Thanks for chapter

Thank you for the chapter

dull

Good chapter

Presh8 da chap keeping gojng

gracia por el capitulo

Ths for the chap