Comments of chapter undefined of Hogwarts：Bloodline Wizard

A bit of a mess chapter. What do you mean as if they had a private conversation? The hat talks in his mind, there is no more private than that. His reaction, or the decision to insert him in that point is questionable, trying to make your MC seem stupid? Yes, yes, authors think "How would I react in this situation", rather than the important questions "How will this look to the readers", let me tell you. Slow on his feet, slow on the uptake. The house decision is illogical: Dark arts...... what does that even mean? Smart, bright. Ravenclaw.

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So any chance of the story being given tags so I can have an idea of if I even want to read this? I know a lot of people besides me directly ignore stories that dont even bother tagging.

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How boring. Every fanfic of HP picks gruffindor, ravenclaw or slytherin.

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