Comments of chapter undefined of Vampires Legacy

Gonna need the character descriptions bc it’s time for *fan art* 💃 Can’t wait to read some more peak fiction!

U finna make all of us say

This is gonna be peak fiction , i can feel it with the way ur writing, the amazing intro , gorey scenes and amazing start to world building plus the comedic relief , love this series gonna stick till the end

One above all , peak creation , lonely at the summit,goats above goats, grandiose masterpiece, impeccable perfection, too exquisite to exist, unbelievably marvelous creation, spectacularly bewildering and stupendous imagination,work of god.

Dakota gonna be moving like this throughout the story

After following your ig for about a year I figured I’d support you by reading this and I’m glad I did! Excited to read more

YO THIS IS REALLY GOOD 😭🔥

will read tomorrow read the first 5 words and decided it’ll be worth my time👍👍👍👍reviewed by slayer🎖

Well the ending to the chapter was a bit, I wouldn't say different but the scenarios that happened to lead that situation were something refreshing. The comedy was great, Chifuyu being sarcastic and knowing how to rile his oppositions with his characteristics. Yeah, I would definitely give it a 8/10, considering it's the start of your novel, but yeah overall a great chapter which kept me being attentive through the whole read with the comedy pieces and the storyline you're trying to portray. But yeah keep it up man. We there to support your journey [img=recommend].

Ngl. Great introduction. Even though I could predict what was going to happen most of the time. Already liking Ariel. Question tho. Is there going to be like magic involved?

Really good introduction chapter, need to see that Ariel illustration asap ‼️

I quite enjoyed this chapter and I'm looking forward to the rest. My only criticism is there was a large amount of info dumping and exposition in the first half although it did dropped in the latter half. Even with the info dump it didn't take away from the enjoyment. I'd give it an 8.8/10. Also the bully scene was tops.

Great first chapter to the story I’m hooked. Keep up the great work

Peakkk

Hayasaka was Here <3

maan never missed never misses never will miss already clears subhahibi umineko fata Morgana dies irea redo of healer and school days . fiction aint recovering from this 🙏🙏

is he coming for the crown👑 this mf don't miss

W

Really enjoyed this first ch and can't wait for more! Characters are interesting and story is good! keep it up!