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  • bladester101
    bladester1011yr
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    I have a prediction that something is gonna cause Ariel to go crazy and she'll kill Shoyo that that might be her betrayal. Also Shoyo is the Tooth Fairy confirmed and Iris is best girl being better for Chifuyu than Erika

    Ch 18 Days Throughout the Training Arc Part 1
    Vampires Legacy
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  • bladester101
    bladester1011yr
    Commented

    Can't wait to see Iris's full potential I get Kobeni vibes from her

    Ch 16 Training Arc Part 3
    Vampires Legacy
    Fantasy · wavyesper
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  • bladester101
    bladester1011yr
    Commented

    Another good chapter. I like how you're having Shoyo be stronger through skill instead of his weapon. Too many stories make a character though just their weapon

    Ch 14 Training Arc Part 1
    Vampires Legacy
    Fantasy · wavyesper
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  • bladester101
    bladester1011yr
    Commented

    Shoyo - I'm aware of the effect I have on women

    Ch 13 No 2 Year Timeskip
    Vampires Legacy
    Fantasy · wavyesper
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  • bladester101
    bladester1011yr
    Commented

    My man you just keep giving more reason and proof to why Shoyo is the best with the whole capybara scene

    Ch 11 Parents Part 4
    Vampires Legacy
    Fantasy · wavyesper
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  • bladester101
    bladester1011yr
    Commented

    Nice chapter I can't wait for the interactions between Shoyo and Amelia

    Ch 10 Parents Part 3
    Vampires Legacy
    Fantasy · wavyesper
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  • bladester101
    bladester1011yr
    Commented

    It's pretty nice that Chifuyu's parents are okay with him being a halfie but it would've been cool if say his mom was against it and it caused friction between the three of them. Although it would be nice it that was what happen in sure it would conflict with the narrative you plan on telling

    Ch 9 Parents Part 2
    Vampires Legacy
    Fantasy · wavyesper
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  • bladester101
    bladester1011yr
    Replied to wavyesper

    I see thanks for the clarification

    Ch 8 Parents Part 1
    Vampires Legacy
    Fantasy · wavyesper
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  • bladester101
    bladester1011yr
    Commented

    Another good chapter I am a bit confused tho. Did they tell Chifuyu's everything that happened like him becoming a half vampire

    Ch 8 Parents Part 1
    Vampires Legacy
    Fantasy · wavyesper
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  • bladester101
    bladester1011yr
    Commented

    That's very true

    Ch 7 Friends
    Vampires Legacy
    Fantasy · wavyesper
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  • bladester101
    bladester1011yr
    Commented

    My boy Shoyo owning another chapter. I love how he casually implied that it would've been fine for Dakota and Erika to witness their best friend being executed

    Ch 7 Friends
    Vampires Legacy
    Fantasy · wavyesper
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  • bladester101
    bladester1011yr
    Commented

    Keeping a good pace not rushing anything and over explaining. I also appreciate that the vampires aren't the strongest. Keep up the good work

    Ch 5 Ariel Ryuji
    Vampires Legacy
    Fantasy · wavyesper
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  • bladester101
    bladester1011yr
    Commented

    My man knows how to get us fiending for more good job

    Ch 4 Resolve Part 3
    Vampires Legacy
    Fantasy · wavyesper
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  • bladester101
    bladester1011yr
    Replied to wavyesper

    World Trigger

    Ch 3 Resolve Part 2
    Vampires Legacy
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  • bladester101
    bladester1011yr
    Commented

    Another top notch chapter. More proof of Shoyo being best character also I get Gojo and Yuuichi Jin vibes from him

    Ch 3 Resolve Part 2
    Vampires Legacy
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  • bladester101
    bladester1011yr
    Commented

    Yo I love court scenes and you were able to capture the essence them. Also Shoyo best character saying it now before it's cliched

    Ch 2 Resolve Part 1
    Vampires Legacy
    Fantasy · wavyesper
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  • bladester101
    bladester1011yr
    Commented

    I quite enjoyed this chapter and I'm looking forward to the rest. My only criticism is there was a large amount of info dumping and exposition in the first half although it did dropped in the latter half. Even with the info dump it didn't take away from the enjoyment. I'd give it an 8.8/10. Also the bully scene was tops.

    Ch 1 The Beginning
    Vampires Legacy
    Fantasy · wavyesper
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