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Comments of chapter undefined of The plot collapses: All the heroines are broken!

Itachi_Hyoudou
Itachi_HyoudouLv4Itachi_Hyoudou

Well, I can see what you tried to do here and I won't lie that it is unique and interesting, But it feels kinda rushed and forced. kinda weird ngl. But you're the author and by all means, you do you.

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wap100
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Perfect!!! Most eavesdropping novels always tend to make the villain ignore the wrongs he suffered from the girls just cuz it was the plot and accept them as if nothing happened I'm not saying he should not accept those girls who helped the protagonist destroy his family at all but he needs to show at least anger, hate, displeasure not just ignore these things like a cupboard character which is not realistic. These girls helped the protagonist destroy his family many times before so if he cares for his family as he claims those factors should make it take so much time and effort for him to truly accept the heroines, even the sister who easily betrayed the family that raised her.

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Kurupts
KuruptsLv15Kurupts

Bro! I love your writing style… I think it’s easy to follow. Keep up the great work! Loving your novel.

ShadowSamurai_69
ShadowSamurai_69Lv4ShadowSamurai_69

let the haters hate, you just write and improve

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LeBlorf
LeBlorfLv14LeBlorf

The writing is perfectly fine, some people just wanna watch the world burn and spread hate where hate doesn't belong. Here's an image of my dog when she had to wear the dreaded cone and got super depressed.

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Night_Walker001
Night_Walker001Lv13Night_Walker001

Can you please make names easy to remember. I mean, I need to check who is it every time a name come. Please give upcoming characters easy names.

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DarkElderTentacle
DarkElderTentacleLv14DarkElderTentacle

See this! I just gifted the story: Massage chair

Deox_HD
Deox_HDLv4Deox_HD

let the haters hate, i like this story

RexHarris
RexHarrisLv14RexHarris

Eh I think this novel is pretty good ! I really enjoyed reading it so far! Don’t know by people hating

Jovictor
JovictorLv4Jovictor

That chapter was...perfect.

Alusec_BR1
Alusec_BR1Lv10Alusec_BR1

perfect... but don't leave her out, make her regret and obsess over him ;-;, or make her a maid

DaoistUdrot0
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Jake255
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Jack_Jackson_3080
Jack_Jackson_3080Lv13Jack_Jackson_3080

great that he is finely waking up and doing what he needs to do this time around lol. I hope he does keep giving the heroines knowledge about the protagonist just to make it harder on him and give himself a advantage over him.

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DaoistjUIpf3
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See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

MoreMercury76
MoreMercury76Lv13MoreMercury76

Thank you for the chapter

victor_arreaza
victor_arreazaLv1victor_arreaza

thanks for the chapter

Kyle_Kingsmaker
Kyle_KingsmakerLv4Kyle_Kingsmaker

Thanks for the chapter.

Kary_KD
Kary_KDLv12Kary_KD

I really like your novel I came across it by chance. TFCTC

Redrive
RedriveLv2Redrive

Estritamente falando a unidimensalisade ultrafonetica ocorre. Situações

Big_Hank
Big_HankLv1Big_Hank

The comments are full of this comments, don't be fooled by bad reviewers and critics. But well, no one has ever bad-mouthed it and criticized at all?. Unless the critical comments have been deleted, there are no bad comments. So don't talk nonsense